revolves around me

I'm such a fan of your loose scratchy style. I love the blank space and the color that kind of draws the eye. I'm not a fan of all the yellow in the window. I feel like its too much, and kind of pulls your eyes away from the character. I would leave the moon, but honestly, its almost impossible to look at his face when there is so much going on next to him.

I love your shading. Its so subtle, and love how its 'stringy' and melds with the line art so well.

Brilliant job with the clothes, he looks great.